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Through the night the stars shine bright,
The moon unveils it’s immaculate beauty and light,
How I wish I could be the moon in his sky,
To give him all the light, the shine and the beauty.

If only the winds would blow this way,
And let me have my way with the breeze,
Give me the one chance I ask for so intently,
In this silent night of darkness.

I would then shine above the darkest sky,
Onto the clearest of them all,
For nothing would lie in my power to truly show,
The meaning he has brought into my life.

The warmth of this love that resides in silence,
The hope that grows without much light,
Will shine forever more,
And all I will do is spread this shine,
And make him feel and get the best that this life of mine could ever give.
Got bored... and these words were just going through my mind... and I thought... why not just write it out...

Perhaps...I'm thinking of someone... I shouldn't be thinking of.. :-(
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DescendedArchangel Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
Quite lovely, actually. :) You're good at this.
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DescendedArchangel Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
No problem! :D hehe. And emotions are a waste if they were to be hidden. =p
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
True emotions flowing freely...:)
Thank you sooooo much!!! :love:
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:iconbamboozledhoodwinker:
i like this one a lot. sometimes my best work is when im just bored. great job! ^_^
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
me too...:) or when I'm depressed..:D
Thank you.. and I'm glad you like it..
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Blue-eyedHawk Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
I know the feeling - being in love with someone is perhaps the most uplifting experience possible. And I also know what it's like to want someone you shouldn't... I hope yours works out.
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
hey... I guess there are a fair proportion of people who've experienced this.... and thank you for your wishes..:)
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:iconaine1991:
Aine1991 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful poem
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2008
Thank you sooo much! :love:
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:iconaine1991:
Aine1991 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I just said the true:)
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skywestphalia Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
nice poem... makes me visualize the image behind it, and the result is indeed so beautiful to behold... :D
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008
Thank you..:) these are more or less heartfelt.... so it's easier to write...
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skywestphalia Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome... :D
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:iconjennzenn:
JennZenn Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
Your poetry is beautiful. You are so creative and your words flow like water. I shall read all of your works. ^^
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
wow..thank you soo much... and thanks for the fav too...:) Lovely to have you on board...:D
it's truly an honour..
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Magpie-Angel Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
you want to make somebody happy?
ah...the moon and it's candle light beams are something to truly behold.
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
yes i do....
and thank you.. you got it just right..:)
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Kesshomaru1689 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
This is so beautiful!! Pure awesome-ness!! :dance:
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
yaay!!! and awesome to hear that..:D
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Shadow-chan93 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it! and the idea for this is pretty good^^
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
Thank you very much.... :D
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Shadow-chan93 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
: hug: :hug: :hug:
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
:hug: back...
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Shadow-chan93 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^ :hug:
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crystalvanlaer Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
I so love it! It is so soft yet sad!
You're goooooood girl!
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Glad you check it out..and thank you sooooooooo much!!!! :D
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crystalvanlaer Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
You're welcome!
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jmjkirk1306 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
I like this, it's not just random lines written...all of it fits and has a purpose.nice job!
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Thank you... A fresh pair of eyes will always see things better than the one who wrote it..:)
Thank you.... :) :bow:
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maddiemoo39 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
this was wonderful, oh how i love your writing style!! Well done :)
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
glad to know!!
Thanks a lot!! :D :D
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knightpanthery2k3 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Wow amazing. I love how each line plays in your mind and gives great significance to this piece. Such imagery and feeling. Great piece
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Thank you ever sooooo much!!!! :) :glomp:
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knightpanthery2k3 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Mhmm np, I am going to have to watch you now. ^^ Talent is such a nice thing to see.
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
thanks... you just made my day... :D :bow:
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:iconknightpanthery2k3:
knightpanthery2k3 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
lol glad I could be of some use. ^^
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KrissyWitch86 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008   Traditional Artist
I love your bored thoughts! :D
Isn't it funny how when you're bored and not really trying to write well, the best things come out?
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Exactly... it's amazing..but when I'm bored...or when I can't sleep late at night, I can write well..:)

Thank you soooooooooo much!! :glomp:
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LovelyBPhotography Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008  Professional Photographer
I know this feeling. Writing is one of your greatest accomplishments. It gives you Love, Hope, and the Strength to move on. Beautifully written..
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
The feeling sucks.... But thank you for you lovely comment... :hug:
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LovelyBPhotography Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008  Professional Photographer
Youre more than welcome hunny! :hug:
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highvoltage7262 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008   Writer
That's good writing for being bored. It's got a good rhythm to it. Nice word choice too. Excellent.
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!! :glomp:
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:iconhighvoltage7262:
highvoltage7262 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008   Writer
No problem. It was really good.
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:iconvonderwall:
vonderwall Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2008
Oh, this poem is very beautiful! :hug:
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2008
A true wish it is... :)
Thanks honey... :glomp:
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:iconvonderwall:
vonderwall Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
You're very welcome. :glomp:
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servile-sinner Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2008
Wow, I completely understood that. I love the moonlight imagery, it fits very well with the situation.
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:iconlady-divine:
Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2008
Thank you very much!!!! :)
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nightfall8705 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
this imagery is beautiful!
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