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In a moment of despair,
We never know what we do,
With the emotions running high,
We need to learn to hang on and think wise.

In a moment of pain,
Where the hurt grows stronger,
Making one weaker and desolate,
There should be a reminder that there’s a better day coming soon.

In a moment of happiness,
We should never forget,
That it’ll never last forever,
So treasure it to make it an everlasting memory.

In a moment of love,
Ask yourself whether it is right,
Do you give more than you take,
Is it right and are you sure.

In a moment of loneliness,
One may find that the world spins slow,
But in truth it is a state of mind,
Which keeps you from seeing the brighter side of life.

In a moment of lust,
Think ahead of your actions,
Make sure you don’t do anything,
To hurt anyone’s feelings.

In a moment of lying,
Don’t ever take things for granted,
For the pain and hurt that you might create,
Will last longer and hurt ever more.

In a moment like this,
Advice and philosophy can go on and on,
But what’s more important,
Is that we try to live by atleast a few of them.

In every moment you’re alive,
Remember the good things in your life,
Be thankful for all you’ve got,
And live to the best you can.

In every moment that you live,
May you always be blessed,
With the treasures of life,
That makes everything bright and happy.
Spur of the moment writing again... Was thinking of a few incidents of my life while taking part in an alms giving this morning (serving food to Buddhist monks).

And it got me thinking of all these... I'm sure there was more.. but I can't remember it all...
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dragondreamzero Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2008
awesome work. i love the way you put it. =)
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2008
thank you.... glad you like it..:D
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SafireStarr Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
absolutely splendid!
you're so right about everything you said.
an instant :+fav: for me :D
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
yaay!!!!
I'm glad you think soooooooooooo.....:D :D :D
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SafireStarr Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
:D you're welcome!
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Katrina-sb Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
wow this is incredible
beautifully written and i love the repetition used with "in a moment of..." and the emotions described so vividly. exceptional work!
and thank you for the comment!
your work is inspirational!
=)
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
thank you soooooooooooooo much!!! :hug:
and you're welcome..:D
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jmjkirk1306 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
I can really relate to this. And it is good advice. There were times when I took a lot for granted and times where i found ways to screw things up a lot. I love the positivity(Is that a word?) in this too. Sometimes people forget about the good things in life and always think of the bad things..this helps :kitty:
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
I'm glad about the way you think...:)
and thanks for coming by..:D
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WickedElphaba Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
You have a lot of great advice in here, like people before me have said. I like how there's the pattern throughout the entire poem, and then the last two stanzas change the first line from "In a moment" to "For every moment" because it really emphasizes life and living it to the fullest. Overall, this is a really great poem!
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
you've got the details pretty well.. thank you for reading so intently..and I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks a lot for your comment.. It is much appreciated.... :love:
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WickedElphaba Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
Anytime!
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Blue-eyedHawk Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
This is very well written - and very good advice.
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
Thank you... thank you.. :bow:
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evenmay-deathwish Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008   Writer
Again with all these comments *bites lip* How do you get so many comments? I gotta know!

Okay so I really liked this poem... I have things to say about a few stanzas! :D

In a moment of love,
Ask yourself whether it is right,
Do you give more than you take,
Is it right and are you sure.


I especially like "do you give more than you take" because in relationships people do this a lot. I love giving but sometimes I think I expect to much in return, you know?

In a moment of loneliness,
One may find that the world spins slow,
But in truth it is a state of mind,
Which keeps you from seeing the brighter side of life.


I used to feel like this all the time and sometimes I still do, but whenever I feel sad I do realize it's just a state of mind! So well captured, it makes me grin just to read!

In a moment of lying,
Don’t ever take things for granted,
For the pain and hurt that you might create,
Will last longer and hurt ever more.


I have an obsession with lying as I know two people who are pathological liars and I'm just very good at picking out the lies from the truth. Of course I lie too. :/ This is probably my favourite stanza, because a lie misplaced can be a terrible thing.

In every moment that you live,
May you always be blessed,
With the treasures of life,
That makes everything bright and happy.


Best ending ever! ♥♥♥
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008
Hey.... Looks like you've connected with a lot that I've said in here..:D and I'm glad to find that out...

Umm... how do I comments? well.. I do take time to read what others say and maybe establish some kind of friendship..:)

Thank you very much for taking time to comment.. It is much appreciated..:hug:
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evenmay-deathwish Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008   Writer
No problem, your poetry is amazing! And yes... well I guess I should be more active on DA then, hmmm? :)

I do really connect with this poem. Can I print it out to save?
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008
sure... go ahead...:) you can print it..:)
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evenmay-deathwish Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008   Writer
hurray!
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Novpyro Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2008  Student Writer
I really this poem. It reminds me a few things that have happened in my life.
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2008
Thank you...:)
We all have our fair share of experiences, don't we?:)
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sethyboy7788 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Lots of good advice, and very nicely written.
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2008
Thank you...:-)
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kanankouae Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Oh you brought out so many emotions...
Very realistic and optimistic at the same time i would say...
Beautiful writing and structure...

I m new in deviant art so can you please check out my gallery?
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thank you for your comment...:)
yes I'll check it out right now.:)
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kanankouae Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thank you soooooo much!!!
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This is a wonderful poem of live and living it everyday, the last lines are my favorites.
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
I'm very happy to hear that from someone who has great talent and wisdom..:)
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I don't know about wisdom, and im just an average to good writer, but whatever knowledge i do have in my thick skull i am always ready to use and give
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
and what you do is awesome... ;)
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Thank you, its nice to know that i am good at this
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
you're welcome...:)
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alexs2602 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Nice concept, well done!
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thank you very much.. :bow:
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IrishLady425 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Student General Artist
This hits a lot closer to home then I'm willing to admit to myself.
Beautiful descriptions, your flow is impeccable.
It's almost awe inspiring to me.
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008
Thank you for your lovely comment...:)
and thanks a lot for the favs too... :D
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Hikaru565 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
Very good its just what i needed right now :thumb80119459:
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
wow... great to know... :D
Thanks you sooo much!! :D
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Shadow-chan93 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's very nice! I like the change from "in a moment" to "in every moment"^^
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
Thank you.... :D
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Shadow-chan93 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome... :hug:
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stfallen Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008   Writer
:)
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
:D thanks for the fav....:glomp:
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NoxNeko Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008   Writer
I really like this, I like how it's set up, how anyone can relate to it. It's really good.
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
Thanks a lot.... :)
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NoxNeko Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008   Writer
You're very welcome.
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alixdlf Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
<3
nice and beautiful :]
i can never write that long.
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Lady-Divine Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
thank you sooo much..:D
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vonderwall Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
So deep and wise words. :hug:
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