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It never was my season by ~Lady-Divine:iconLady-Divine:



As I lie awake,
Wondering where my fate is heading,
Uncertain of my blinded destiny,
I yearn to feel the warmth of your skin next to mine.

Even though we barely knew each other,
The good and bad times we shared,
Always made me feel so good,
Because deep down inside I felt connected.

The sweet thoughts of you,
The eternal echo of your voice in my ears,
Lights a spark in my spirit,
And makes me smile with thoughts of love.

I loved your humour and your playful ways,
The way you brought countless smiles upon my face,
The countless times you always kept in touch,
And filled my days with your lovely presence.

But now the shine has faded away,
You never seem to seek me no more,
I miss everything that was there about you,
Maybe it never was my season to begin with.
©2008-2009 ~Lady-Divine
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Dedicated to someone who remains to be special in my eyes, heart and soul....

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:iconicrymost-lacrymose:
wow. i like it.

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Indulge in the skittish darkness of the night that will engulf your soul
:iconlady-divine:
Thanks... and glad to know that..:love:

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:iconderrochar:
Beautiful..I think one of my favourite part was that: "..The eternal echo of your voice in my ears.."
So cool line.

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You should never take more than you give.
:iconlady-divine:
thanks a mil...:) and that line sure does happen all the time..:)

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:icondarkpiano7:
beautiful poem... =)

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:iconlady-divine:
Thank you!!! :D

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

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:icondarkpiano7:
you're welcome

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:iconsethyboy7788:
This poem is so familiar to me. Countless friends have come and gone, but few compare to this guy I met last semester. He and I have been studying for classes together, and through it all, we've become good friends. Your poem describes him perfectly. I just hope we don't end up with the fate described in the last stanza. Beautiful poem!

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"Life is an endless torrent of pain and misery. All one can do is hang on long enough to end on a graceful note and keep one's humanity intact."
:iconlady-divine:
wow.. thanks a lot.. and thanks for the :+fav: too..:)

and don't have any negative thoughts..:) think positive... and good luck! treasure what you have...:)

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

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:iconvisualpoetress:
Beautiful poem, I love it.

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