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There he was,
With deep set eyes and,
A deceiving yet sexy smile,
That made me feel like I was on a heavenly cloud.

There he was,
With a touch so soft,
An attitude and style,
That would never make me want to let go out of sight and reach.

There he is,
Waiting to give me what I asked,
Waiting to fulfill what he wanted too,
Yet so entwined and so full of emotions.

There he is,
In the middle of the room,
As I gather my countless thoughts,
That are all filled with feelings for him.

There is this connection,
I can never explain,
Something I seldom feel for people,
Which made me realize he appeared to be special in the light of my eyes.

There is this connotation,
That rules my life,
I never seem to get lucky to get what I adore,
Maybe they’re never meant to be.

There is one wish,
That this heart of mine holds tenderly,
That I would let him know how I feel,
So the emotions wouldn’t threaten the life it belongs to.

There is yet another wish,
That resides within me,
To see him happy all his life,
And at least to be a friend who cares.

An angel he appears to be,
Maybe in disguise yet captivating,
A haven I yearn to make.
For this angel to reside…… is a hope with much affection..
©2008-2009 ~Lady-Divine
:iconlady-divine:

Author's Comments

It\'s about someone I have grown so fond of... but highly doubt will ever work... but as long as the emotions run high, I can write to glory...:)

Dedicated - to him.. :)

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:iconjennzenn:
Ohh Lady Divine,
It is so full of emotion. I feel the longing of the heart in this piece. To yearn so deeply in ones soul for something seemingly so out of reach. I wish he could be yours....for if only but a fleeting moment.
Beautiful

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You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you. ~Ray Bradbury
:iconlady-divine:
Thank you sooooooooooo much!!! and for the lovely wish.. it truly means alot to hear it from someone... renews the hope..:) :hug: thanks again ever so kindly

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

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:iconiamiron:
I understand the pain and the glory of what you wrote.

I hope all can work out well for you.
:iconlady-divine:
Thank you soo much for your wishes.....and for coming by...:)

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

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:iconnoxneko:
Oh my goodness, this is very beautiful writing. It's so amazing how someone can inspire you to write the most beautiful work. Most of my writings are inspired by my wonderful fiance. I have been a poet for 12 years and never in my life have I writen as well as I do now. Good work Lady-Divine, I really hope for you that you could get the courage to say something. I really think that whatever happens at least you tried. If you don't at least try you may wonder your whole life if it could have worked or not. :)
:iconlady-divine:
Thank you for that positive punch... :)
thanks a lot.... and in fact, this took me less than 10 mins to write actually...:D

I'm amazed at the things i feel sometimes..... and I really adore this guy..no matter how wrong it may be..:D I really don't know.. it's inexplicable as it is...

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

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:iconnoxneko:
You are most welcome. Wow, less than 10min to write that is amazing, The only things that I've written in that short of a time are my two really short poems. Very well done I say :) Oh and what do you mean when you say that you adore the guy no matter how wrong it is?
:iconsethyboy7788:
This poem fits my situation right now... several of my poems are written to a single person whom I've become attached to. I'm glad I'm not alone. :D

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"Life is an endless torrent of pain and misery. All one can do is hang on long enough to end on a graceful note and keep one's humanity intact."
:iconmaster-tonio:
i wish u the best of the luck! awsome poem xD

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:iconpurecountry:
So vivid and full of emotions. I relate so well and I thank you for your beautiful words..:heart:

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"You can kiss my natural born, redneck to the bone, ever lovin' COUNTRY ASS!!"

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