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There he was,
With deep set eyes and,
A deceiving yet sexy smile,
That made me feel like I was on a heavenly cloud.

There he was,
With a touch so soft,
An attitude and style,
That would never make me want to let go out of sight and reach.

There he is,
Waiting to give me what I asked,
Waiting to fulfill what he wanted too,
Yet so entwined and so full of emotions.

There he is,
In the middle of the room,
As I gather my countless thoughts,
That are all filled with feelings for him.

There is this connection,
I can never explain,
Something I seldom feel for people,
Which made me realize he appeared to be special in the light of my eyes.

There is this connotation,
That rules my life,
I never seem to get lucky to get what I adore,
Maybe they’re never meant to be.

There is one wish,
That this heart of mine holds tenderly,
That I would let him know how I feel,
So the emotions wouldn’t threaten the life it belongs to.

There is yet another wish,
That resides within me,
To see him happy all his life,
And at least to be a friend who cares.

An angel he appears to be,
Maybe in disguise yet captivating,
A haven I yearn to make.
For this angel to reside…… is a hope with much affection..
©2008-2009 ~Lady-Divine
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It\'s about someone I have grown so fond of... but highly doubt will ever work... but as long as the emotions run high, I can write to glory...:)

Dedicated - to him.. :)
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Ohh Lady Divine,
It is so full of emotion. I feel the longing of the heart in this piece. To yearn so deeply in ones soul for something seemingly so out of reach. I wish he could be yours....for if only but a fleeting moment.
Beautiful

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Thank you sooooooooooo much!!! and for the lovely wish.. it truly means alot to hear it from someone... renews the hope..:) :hug: thanks again ever so kindly

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I understand the pain and the glory of what you wrote.

I hope all can work out well for you.
Thank you soo much for your wishes.....and for coming by...:)

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Oh my goodness, this is very beautiful writing. It's so amazing how someone can inspire you to write the most beautiful work. Most of my writings are inspired by my wonderful fiance. I have been a poet for 12 years and never in my life have I writen as well as I do now. Good work Lady-Divine, I really hope for you that you could get the courage to say something. I really think that whatever happens at least you tried. If you don't at least try you may wonder your whole life if it could have worked or not. :)
Thank you for that positive punch... :)
thanks a lot.... and in fact, this took me less than 10 mins to write actually...:D

I'm amazed at the things i feel sometimes..... and I really adore this guy..no matter how wrong it may be..:D I really don't know.. it's inexplicable as it is...

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You are most welcome. Wow, less than 10min to write that is amazing, The only things that I've written in that short of a time are my two really short poems. Very well done I say :) Oh and what do you mean when you say that you adore the guy no matter how wrong it is?
This poem fits my situation right now... several of my poems are written to a single person whom I've become attached to. I'm glad I'm not alone. :D

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i wish u the best of the luck! awsome poem xD

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So vivid and full of emotions. I relate so well and I thank you for your beautiful words..:heart:

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