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Under the moonlit sky by ~Lady-Divine:iconLady-Divine:



Under the moonlit sky,
With teary eyes,
He unleashed his hopes and desires to the winds,
With hope that they would come true.

Under the moonlit sky,
He would wait impatiently,
For time was running out,
And he did not see other alternatives.

Under the moonlit sky,
He would wish even harder each day,
With arms wide open,
Waiting to receive all what he wanted.

Under the moonlit sky,
As he waited impatiently,
He saw the spark of glory,
As his desires turned into reality.

Under the moonlit sky,
He now had everything he ever wanted,
But it was never enough for him, for he wanted even more,
And his greed never led to true satisfaction anymore.

Under the moonlit sky,
Little did he realize,
His greed and desires,
Has brought destruction to his life.

Under the moonlit sky,
He now lays low,
Hoping to live that day again,
Where he was only wishing and had nothing.

Under the moonlit sky,
He now realizes,
There’s more beauty to life,
If only you look around and live life to the best you can.
©2008-2009 ~Lady-Divine
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I was thinking of a friend who was very lucky and got everything he ever wanted. It came with hard work, but he deviates from the true meaning of love and life. He was blinded by everything else and has now come to his senses.

When you go after everything you desire in life, there is a chance that destruction could be lying somewhere in your path. Choose wisely. It is always better late than never to make changes in your life for your own good and perhaps that of others…. Live right, life free and be happy…
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thats really beautiful... good message

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-Alan, How are the ticks down there?
"I think they're getting sexual thoughts about me."

"Shit we're pimpin' this place out!" -Kait Rokowski.

-The Queen would like to maketh you her bitch.
"I accept this bitchdom."
Thank you..:D

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And the very first piece of yours that I read speaks directly to my soul.

There is much to be said for power, but so much more to be said for marrying that power with responsibility.

Very well done. Wisdom makes the best written word.
Thank you ever so kindly for your comment..:)

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

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words can say so much....and ur say it beautifully. a deep message indeed...i can relate it to so many of my friends...who changed...drifted away slowly without even knowing it. but more importantly..it speaks to me so deeply. reminds of an 'old me'...so much like the person in your poem. well done.

i wrote something a couple of days ago..it seems to continue from where you've left off....its called "my refuge" ...have a glance if u wish. keep the words flowing...

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Don't walk behind me...for i may not lead!
Don't walk in front of me...for i may not follow!
walk beside me and be my friend...tat is all tat i ask of u!

--->aPocALyPsE boY
I already read and commented on "My refuge"..:)
so looks like we've got something similar..
and thanks for the comment..:D

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

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you are welcome =)

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-Alan, How are the ticks down there?
"I think they're getting sexual thoughts about me."

"Shit we're pimpin' this place out!" -Kait Rokowski.

-The Queen would like to maketh you her bitch.
"I accept this bitchdom."
That is beautiful! I love how it descended to something that was in the beginning, and I really loved its ending, sort of made me reach to a relief :aww:

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`·.,¸¸,.◦· ღ Ľ i v e Úp 2 uŔ Đ r e a m s ღ ·◦.,¸¸,.·´

·.¤٭ Words do more than plant miracle seeds ٭¤.·
Great to know.. and thanks a lot for your comment..:hug:

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

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this one is beautiful
love it

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